Adjudication, an’ya
FIRST PLACE
more than fifty years
we wandered side by side
in seeming bliss
who sees the cracks and flaws
we patched with liquid gold
Christa Pandey, USA
For First Place, I chose this stellar tanka and I cannot begin to praise it enough! The rhythm is to perfection, and the words are not too few nor too many. The stunning juxtaposition between repairing the “cracks and flaws” in a relationship alongside the process of Kintsugi, a centuries-old Japanese art of repairing broken pottery and transforming it into a new work of art with liquid gold. The name of this technique is derived from the words “Kin” (golden) and “tsugi” (joinery), which translates to mean “golden repair.” The “scars and flaws” of a broken ceramic become the focus and turn an object into something unique and exquisite. Kintsugi dates back to the 15th century and is an elegant way to amend ceramics. It pertains to the Zen ideal of Wabi-sabi, the concept of embracing imperfection. and finding pleasure in aged and worn objects and valuing their blemishes as beautiful. Kintsugi repair also relates to other Japanese expressions, such as mottainai, which means to regret wasting something, and mushin, which means to free one’s mind and accept change. This is a definite “wish I had written that” tanka. Congratulations Christa. ------
SECOND PLACE
dried cattails
delicately spun with frost
confections
sweetening the bitterness
of winter without you
Debbie Strange, Canada
In Second Place is this charming tanka by Debbie Strange. Only an experienced tanka poet would notice that
the “dried cattails/delicately spun with frost” look like “confections”. This is a fine example of “showing” rather
than “telling”. She continues showing in the final lines with her use of the word “sweetening”, and then relates
It to a human element with “the bitterness of winter without you”. Debbie has chosen her words very carefully
which sets her tanka apart from others. Well done for this author, as usual. Thank you, Debbie!
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THIRD PLACE
between the pages
of a foreign language book
love poems
a pressed violet links me
to the life of a stranger
Carole MacRury, USA
For Third Place, I’ve selected this eloquent tanka by Carole MacRury. A concept we can easily relate to with a songlike tanka rhythm, plus a link between something taken from nature and a human response to it. What makes it even more special is the connection between the reader and the person who pressed the violet. In this tanka, there is no need to exchange words between individuals who speak different languages. Congrats Carole.
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HONORABLE MENTION
this morning
on my mother’s tombstone
a spider web
at the sun’s first ray
momentary strings of pearls
Milan Rajkumar, India
As an Honorable Mention, this fine tanka captures the concept of “transitory” we all long to write about. Milan’s final line says it all with “momentary strings of pearls” as the metaphor for how short and fleeting life can be,” one pearl” at a time. This tanka has a nature reference as well as a human emotion. Thank you Milan!
